#1
God give me something to believe in
My hopes fading fast
Im living in old memories
Im still dealing with the past

My thoughts are only of you
My dreams are all the words you used to say
How can I get over you if I live like your still here
I know this isnt right, I know its not okay

I try so hard to move on
Like you were never here with me
Ill try to get you out of my head
Cause thats the way it should be

I got too close to you
Practically attached
I dont think I can handle letting go
You just sat back and watched me crash

I hit the ground so hard
You just let me be
I landed right on the rocks
You just killed me


My ex girlfriend wrote this and told me to put it on here today to see what people thought of it. Its her first lyric so ya... I put music to it and it sounds pretty good but I dont like the 3rd line in the last stanza "i landed right on the rocks." didnt go good with the rest of it imo.
#4
What kinda beat does this have (if it's lyrics)? The reason why i say this is because i'm having trouble finding a rhythm. I see some sort of structure but it kinda falls apart in the middle of stanza 2 then it comes back. I hope your ex gets something out of what i'm saying. Thanks for writing though.
Doesn't matter who you are or where you're from all you need to do is know who you are.
#6
idk. the way i do it is find a song that has a similar rythm. Ask your ex what she was listening to the day she wrote it. that might help.
Doesn't matter who you are or where you're from all you need to do is know who you are.