#1
I opened up a rock stand
gonna play with my band
bustin out everyday
even on "SUNDAY!"

cause rock has no limit
rock has no time
no one will believe that we're the best on the line
Only ten bucks to come to the show
Time to tell everyone
let 'em all know

[chorus]

that we are the rockstars
that live in your neighborhood
we are the punk rock
when your parnets say NO!
why aren't you listening
why aren't you caring
who cares what they say
just throw up your hands
and let us know

[verse]

So i made it to the top
of the pack
never gonna hold back
gonna break all the speakers
and the ties to the past
never gonna let go
never say no
cause everyone needs to hear

[go to chorus]


The sound to this is Zebrahead-esk so the verses are kinda a rap style and then the chorus is singing. When i get to the bridge and maybe even the third verse they will probably be singing as well. but it's not quite done yet, i'm thinking up a third verse and a bridge so i hope you like this version and please critic me. Thanks
Doesn't matter who you are or where you're from all you need to do is know who you are.
#2
i think it would work best as crotch rock like the darkness or tenacious d. the chorus doesnt seem to rhyme which is kind of important in a rock song, but if it works the way it is then nevermind

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#3
This seems like a more regular rock song to me, or maybe alternative. I can sort of put a rhythm to it, and I like the idea. You might want to work a bit on overall flow, though. In my mind, the flow of the lines kept changing over and over again.

My song's more metal or hard rock-esque, but here's the link: Infected
#4
the rhythm does changes once in the first verse and then the chorus changes once and the second verse gradually slows down
Doesn't matter who you are or where you're from all you need to do is know who you are.