#1
A song I really enjoyed recording and making.....heavy ...but has some of my best melodic moments I think...its a bit long....but I think interesting enough to keep ure attention....i hope u guys enjoy it.....my friend LOKI(from metbb) did bass.....its a song about comin clsoe to loosing that someone very special in your life.......at times things seem so bleak yet there can always be hope for ppl who are true and genuine in their intentions....blah blah blah...ill stop tlakin an let u decide for ureslef...!!!...PEAC EOUT

"LOSS AND HOPE"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=53722
http://www.myspace.com/modelmeobsolete

Autumn arrived
Dense fog lingers
Ashes of past
Nigh is the hour
Torn from my embrace
A forlorn day
Embraced the night
With the guilt and my shame
Darkness enclosed
My solitary thoughts
Awaiting word
On the bed of nails
Glisten light
Faded to black
Once I crave
Erased from my past

She spoke to break the silence
Gazing upon the set sun
Warm breath flickering stare
Her eyes fixed on mine
Into the unknown she lumbers
The spirits in her footsteps
The trees call out to her
To return to her forsaken abode

Swaying unto me
Days of yesterday
Warmth of the touch
Forgotten the taste
I shall seek my fate
Heart glowed with hope
In midst of disorder

Alone I wander
For you I search the nights
My fate is not what it seems
With you I shall be one, again

Torn from my embrace
Eyes fixed on the sight
I have faltered too long
None shall stop me now
Your stare unto the moon
I see it in the stars
Ashen from the solitude
I brace for eternal bliss

Here you come
And stay with me
I will be
The perfect one
Long brown hair
(Say those words)
Your graceful eyes
(Make you stay)
Fall to the side
As you take my hand

Return from my troubled past
Your breath felt like heaven
No longer by my side
The loneliness that I loathe
Last edited by waz416 at May 22, 2008,
#2
Wow I don't like screamo but you made me hate it more, it just doesn't seam like screaming, and try a different riff then the same thing... over over over over over over over .... pause, chinese ****, over over over over.

More effort plz, thx
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#3
Quote by DSchmitty
Wow I don't like screamo but you made me hate it more, it just doesn't seam like screaming, and try a different riff then the same thing... over over over over over over over .... pause, chinese ****, over over over over.

More effort plz, thx



Hahahaha......yeah I was afraid thats whats gonna end up happening.....ppl not listnein to it all teh way through.....id say u do...coz the song relaly goes through some changes in thhe 2nd half...soem clean singing and lush acoutic arrangements with strings and piano...o well.....tahnx for teh feedback.....Keep rockin..PEAC EOUT

http://www.myspace.com/modelmeobsolete
#4
dude i heard it, its genius, really, that moron that said that crap about being screamo needs to mature a bit and then try to understand real music. Nice work i really dig it!
#5
sorry, someone got ahold of my account.
Great song!
Last edited by StealingSociety at May 23, 2008,