What do you guys think of these lyrics so far? I have a verse and bridge:

I shoot the bullets out a pistol today
Waiting for us to cross with so much (catastrophe!)
When everything around me falls
And the bullets echo to the floor
Defeated without hope

So you can say what you want
It’s no hole in my side
You can’t take it away
I won’t live and let die
You can cross the line
But I’m still winning

Tell me what you think