#1
Yeah im free falling
off the empire state building
ive been doing it since you were here

and i know that im not perfect
but you are
and you don't even know it yet

but im crazy for you girl

and when I...
CHORUS:
look into your eyes i see straight to your soul
without you girl, this world is just too cold
so take me by the hand
and i can help you understand
how i feel

cause to me-- you're kind of a big deal


words cannot describe how i feel
im hanging on our every word
i know in my heart that this is real

my heart skips a beat
when i hear your voice
i think im in love, with you

chorus

yeah i'm free falling
off the empire state building
waiting for you to be here.
Last edited by wyoming_soldier at May 23, 2008,
#2
free fallin', free free fallin'


haha jk i had to

i really liked it its very original
#3
After "because I..." you jump straight into the chorus. It doesn't flow all too well like that. Repeating the chorus would work just fine, actually.

I like it, though.
Last edited by Soul-Monger at May 22, 2008,