#1
Please crit my new song called shattered soul on my profile. As always c4c.
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#2
Firstly, im not digging your tone at all. It sounds far too distorted and muddled.

Now when the main riff kicks in, thats pretty cool. Its a solid headbang-worthy riff. The playing gets a little sloppy here and there but its not too bad.

I would definitely say that you have some cool riffs and ideas going around in this song, but I will suggest you work on the tone and recording quality.

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#3
The tones a bit sharp, but the playings good. When the second guitar comes in the riffage is nice and heavy. Please crit mine on my profile

Thanks Mark
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#4
Hey there, (crit as listen): The distortion is WAY to muffled - totally ruined the song for me, it was just too much.
Liked the tune though, just hard on the ears after a while.


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#5
It's good from around :35 seconds and after. But the opening solo sounds really sharp, and off timing. Kind of sounded like you were just playing around. But the riff after that sounds good, and the solo at 1:35 sounds pretty good too. Crit my recording? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=867670
#6
I like the second solo a lot! The first one was kinda weak by comparison, as mentioned above. Just try filling that space in with some different ideas and you will eventually get one that works well on it.

Any chance of putting some midrange warmth on that rhythm tone? Is it scooped all the way to zero, or what? I guarantee you this song would sound a ton better with a fat tone there.

I like the riffs, cool stuff. Drums sound pretty decent as well.


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#7
Quote by RobinTrower12
Firstly, im not digging your tone at all. It sounds far too distorted and muddled.

Now when the main riff kicks in, thats pretty cool. Its a solid headbang-worthy riff. The playing gets a little sloppy here and there but its not too bad.

I would definitely say that you have some cool riffs and ideas going around in this song, but I will suggest you work on the tone and recording quality.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=865755


This. The main riff though.... damn.

Clean up the intro, and for heavens sake, give it some rythm, or bass or something. Its the second intro that is bare to the bone.