Hey guys, this is completely re-done (even a lot of the lyrics) version of an older recording of mine, You'll be Sorry. It's a pretty chill tune so metalheads may want to skip this one. Please let me know what you think, what can be improved, etc.

Last edited by mash71 at May 22, 2008,
Thanks for the crit, I think I'm going to re-record vox today. Yours has been critted back .
Overall, I quite enjoyed this tune. Everything sounds fairly solid.
I agree about adding a little reverb to the acoustics.

Crit Mine?
SCHECTER "Diamond Series" REVENGER Guitar
ZOOM HD16CD Digital Mulit-Track Recorder
1 SHURE SM-57,1 Audio-Technica AT2035, 1 APEX 435 Mic. & 2 APEX 180 Condencer Mics
Edited with Audacity & Adobe Audition 3