#1
suck it fools-
Yo i was in africa, sittin in mah house
when these men came in- took my children and my spouse

i walked for days, saw things i never knew
need to take a shower son i smell like beef stew
but these whitties dont care- they just keepa whipping
starving me to death woman get me some chicken

huh? yeah! huh? yeah

i got on a boat, scared out of my mind
i would eat anything i could find
i foundza nailz, in mah hand
i know it soundz crazy but i came up wit a plan
getting tired of these slave owners killin my hope
Day 26 son no time to mope
i broke outta mah locks, let all these others out
took over the boat and took the white man down

huh? yeah! huh?... I SAID YEAH!

We cheered and screamed, we were happy and gay
yet some how we ended up in da U S A
i was so mad man i swore i would cuss
but the president, - yeah he fought for us
we won the case i couldn't believe it
cmon suck spin that sh!ttz

(this was improv me and my friend had which we turned in for a US history project [btw were both white but our teacher is black and always jokes around with the race card so we snuck it in there], i just saw this forum and thought id put it up,
the full song is on
http://www.myspace.com/nathanstunesies

(made off garage band foo)
#2
you're either brilliant
or a freshman
either way i salute you
this is pretty stupid but i was entertained a bit
I want Super Saiyan abilities
#3
were in the 8th grade
the original, fully improv lyrics, were to say the least, not appropriate to turn in raw, so we replaced some of it with the stuff written above, but for the most part, we just hit record and after ~30 min stopped it and cut out what we didnt like to get the final product.
o and i left out intro which goes in the tune of "i will survive":
At first I was chained, I was petrified
Thinkin why am I being whippd by all dese white guys
But then I spent eight weeks on a boat
watchin all others around me die
but i will survive
i will survive (echo out)

thanks for the compliment i guess other then the saying it was stupid part >:|
#4
well it's entertaining and tells the story of how we have lots of black culture, and it's truthful to an extent. congrats my friend!
#5
dude rap is ****ing gayer than **** go listen to heavy metal you ****ing losers.

Rappers don't play instruments they just write lyrics and they can't even ****ing do that right
#6
Quote by Ma27hew
dude rap is ****ing gayer than **** go listen to heavy metal you ****ing losers.

Rappers don't play instruments they just write lyrics and they can't even ****ing do that right


I suggest you calm down and watch your language. Warned.
This is not a pipe
#7
^you're an idiot Ma27hew^

Quite a few rappers are great lyricists and come up with clever turns-of-phrases and songs full of emotional content. Just because the genre of rap has hit a speed bump where about 90% of the rappers out there wanna talk about being from the ghetto or chicks with nice apple bottoms doesn't mean that you can stick a fork in the whole genre. Try listening to old Pac and Biggie records. Common, Kanye, Nas, Slick Rick, Run DMC, Beastie Boys, Afrika Baambataa, any one of these will surely change your mind. And if not, then, have fun with your 'sweaty men in leather pants with huge bulges sticking out' music...
Knock, Knock

Who's there?


I Fucked your sister
#8
Quote by Ma27hew
Rappers don't play instruments they just write lyrics and they can't even ****ing do that right


ever heard of the Beastie Boys?
they contradict every part of the statement you made.

to TS:
it makes all the cooler that you turned it into a school project.
There's a road that leads to the end of all suffering. You should take it.


- Jericho Caine


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secret, aaaaagent maaan.
#9
lol @ Ma27hew,
digging back weeks for an opportunity to spam/flame/genre bash to earn himself a warning.

back on topic:

i got on a boat, scared out of my mind
i would eat anything i could find
i foundza nailz, in mah hand

you have a few things that should be addresses in the story, if you can.
later he is a prisoner, breaking out of his locks.
he shouldn't get on the boat,
he should be tossed or herded on to it, don't you think?
or something that sounds less voluntary.
and how does he magically find a nail in his hand?
you're messing with continuity for the rhyme with plan.
artistic license? sure. but avoid when possible.
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