Nice man, great quality recording. As zeroyon said the main riff is great. It has a nice floe to it and works very well.

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You gonna bark all day little doggie?
i like it, it has a real metal core feel, (don't take that badly), and it reminds me a lot of shadows fall, but it also sounded it parts like steve lukather, bot in a good way.

Overall, top stuff.
Nice intro! (Fairly Metallica-ish)
The Bass riff right after is also quite cool!
Overall, I love the riffs thoughout the entire track - quite strong!
The drums are also strong thoughout!!
The riffage at the end is totally Kick Ass!

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SCHECTER "Diamond Series" REVENGER Guitar
ZOOM HD16CD Digital Mulit-Track Recorder
1 SHURE SM-57,1 Audio-Technica AT2035, 1 APEX 435 Mic. & 2 APEX 180 Condencer Mics
Edited with Audacity & Adobe Audition 3