#2
I'm to tired to give decent crit, but work on the transitions, it doesn't seem to go between ideas smoothly.

I quite liked the guitar solo, more than the bass solo. The main riff needs to have a theme to it, it seems to be the least eventful part of the song. Yeah, second half kind of lost me, basically it lost my attention, probably because I'm tired so nevermind that.

Sorry for this poor attempt at crit. (don't expect any in return for that, not that I have anything on here to crit anyway) Hope it helps you in some way.
#3
I like the way you used the bass, but the guitar was too bland. I liked the guitar solo but you should come up with more licks instead of repeating the ones you have right now. The bass solo was awesome. Great job.

mind critting mine?(new one in sig) Thanks.