#1
One Change

One mistake
Can ruin a life
Turn love into pain
And joy into strife.

One regret
Can make you pay,
Want to live for the night
And hide through the day.

One choice
Can take it all,
Destroy your life
And make you fall.

One change
Can keep you going
You’re heart still beating
And love still flowing.
Rock On HARDCORE

Please crit this. My fav piece that I've written.
Goodbye

Forum for tattoo artists/painting and drawing: Electronic Ink
Last edited by nugznbudz at May 23, 2008,
#2
Get a different title, One's already taken. Even though it's allowed it still not cool to have the same song title as someone else.

EDIT: I would call it "One Change"
#3
Quote by pwrmax
Get a different title, One's already taken. Even though it's allowed it still not cool to have the same song title as someone else.

EDIT: I would call it "One Change"


Thanks for the advice.
Rock On HARDCORE

Please crit this. My fav piece that I've written.
Goodbye

Forum for tattoo artists/painting and drawing: Electronic Ink