#1
As I’m watching the clouds pass by
Looking up at the stormy sky
A raindrop trickles down my arm
The angels have sounded the alarm
My punishment is due
But god already knew

My heroin
The needle takes away the pain
My heroin
Everything seems to be ok
My heroin
It pierces through my skin
My heroin
It unleashes the anger within

The bad thoughts turn to good
My confused thoughts are now understood
My life means nothing to me
Even god will agree
My thoughts are now clear
As I start to disappear

My heroin
The needle takes away the pain
My heroin
Everything seems to be ok
My heroin
It pierces through my skin
My heroin
It unleashes the anger within

Fading, just fading to black
As I start to attack
Curtains ripped
Chairs are flipped
My life is gone
As dusk turns to dawn

My heroin
The needle takes away the pain
My heroin
Everything seems to be ok
My heroin
It pierces through my skin
My heroin
It unleashes the anger within

I can’t win
I start to spin
I fall to the ground
Lost but never found
This heroin is starting to grieve
Like you could never believe

My heroin
The needle takes away the pain
My heroin
Everything seems to be ok
My heroin
It pierces through my skin
My heroin
Its unleashes the anger within
"You've got to dance like nobody else is watching.
Dream like you will live forever.
Live like you're going to die tomorrow,
and love like it is never gonna hurt."
-- James Dean (1931-1955)

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This man has the right idea.


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oh yeahhh
#2
I think it's awesome. Do you have any guitar ideas or how the stylistically would be sung.

My favorite line is "My life means nothing to me, even God will agree".
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#3
I love the dark picture you paninted
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#5
this was pretty awful.
My heroin
It unleashes the anger within

no, just ... no
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#6
Quote by SomeoneYouKnew
this was pretty awful.
My heroin
It unleashes the anger within

no, just ... no


+1 That's way too cliche dude.


I do however like the imagery in the first verse, especially:

A raindrop trickles down my arm
The angels have sounded the alarm
My punishment is due
But god already knew


You do seem to lose some of that imagery towards the end of the song - I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but maybe try to get some good metaphors going in the final verse?
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