#1
Hey I recorded the song again, better guitar and all that jazz, Anyone think the reverb in the latter bit is too much??

www.myspace.com/markyeomanmusic

Post a link and I'll crit stuff as soon as i can.

edit: thanks
Last edited by yeoman125 at May 24, 2008,
#3
I like it. It's a pretty decent song.

The reverb may be a bit much, try making it a shorter echo, but the same amount (if that makes sense :P)
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#4
Sup!!
Hey there man, I think everything sounds pretty fine!
Personally thought that the drumming was the best in this tune.


Crit Mine?
GEAR:
SCHECTER "Diamond Series" REVENGER Guitar
VOX AD30VT Amp
ZOOM HD16CD Digital Mulit-Track Recorder
1 SHURE SM-57,1 Audio-Technica AT2035, 1 APEX 435 Mic. & 2 APEX 180 Condencer Mics
Edited with Audacity & Adobe Audition 3
#5
Quote by starverse
Sup!!
Hey there man, I think everything sounds pretty fine!
Personally thought that the drumming was the best in this tune.


Crit Mine?


you bitch the drumming was a drum machine

nah thanks!
#6
Hmm, I like it. Lots of energy right from the start. Reminds me of the Ramones in a way. Vocals are nice, lots of feeling. little solo was fitting. Good song man. But for improvement I would say... Tighten up thse drums... They lose the beat in the middle, just kidding
Quote by Gabel
You are EXTREMELY WRONG! I have played it. I own an 18W and it would be an awful stereo amp, it's way too bright, breaks up too easily and so on. Secondly, why would a guitar store sell an hifi amp.
#7
Quote by starverse
Sup!!
Hey there man, I think everything sounds pretty fine!
Personally thought that the drumming was the best in this tune.


Crit Mine?


I think the opposite.. the drumming was the only thing I didn't like; everything was quite awesome.. love the singing. Lots of feeling and cool voice.