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Hard to explain the genre, heh. Anyway, it's a work in progress, and I wanted to know if what I have so far is good.

Break no Silence


Verse 1:

In this world so ridden with hate
In these homes so broken
Can't atone for the past mistakes
Cannot pay the debts we've made

Pre Chorus:

This we knew, all along
Would come back to haunt us
All alone, when you're gone
We won't have the lifelight

Chorus:

Scream but these ears don't hear me
These echo's break no slence
This vow to end the silence
Our prayers to end the silence


Short, I know, but I wanted to know if it was good, so far.

C4C :]