Hard to explain the genre, heh. Anyway, it's a work in progress, and I wanted to know if what I have so far is good.

Break no Silence

Verse 1:

In this world so ridden with hate
In these homes so broken
Can't atone for the past mistakes
Cannot pay the debts we've made

Pre Chorus:

This we knew, all along
Would come back to haunt us
All alone, when you're gone
We won't have the lifelight


Scream but these ears don't hear me
These echo's break no slence
This vow to end the silence
Our prayers to end the silence

Short, I know, but I wanted to know if it was good, so far.

C4C :]