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This is my first attempt to writing song lyrics. Any advice in spots would be very helpful.

Thank you.
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There once was a girl who made me smile…

She’s only with me every once in a while...

But to see her smile I would die,
But I’d have a broken heart for the after life,
Missing her everyday, as we let time just drift away.

Everyone knows her as the unfriendly one, but if she was gone the world would be done.

Straight to hell is where we would go, and we’d see the ones we don’t want to know.

So stay with us to the end of time, or just be with me and I’ll be fine.

To see her smile I would die,
But I’d have a broken heart for the after life,
Missing her everyday, as we let time drift away.

I’ve been with you for only a while, but you’re the one who makes life worth while.

So be with me you misfit child, and we’ll stay together for a long time worth while.

Having fun everyday, just trying to take the bad days away.

So to see you smile I would die,
But I’d have a broken heart in the after life,
Missing you everyday, as you let your time on earth fade away…