The main riff is alright. But the song's really unoriginal imo. Sorry, but the vocals are really bad. The acoustic part sounded pretty good. Even though I'm not a fan of breakdowns, the ending actually sounded kind of cool.

the guitar parts sounded really good, the main riff was really good. but i must agree the vocals were a little off. when the acoustic kicks in is pretty good, i like it,
the lyrics are good, just fix the singing a little.
and also the transition between acoustic back to distortion is a little rough but the ending is pretty good.

and btw "dont you know" is good tune

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