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First - Red
6 43%
Second - Blue
8 57%
Voters: 14.
#1
evil shadows
thoughts of death.
words of venom
stain my breath

i pause to warn
all who read,
the darkness finds
a way to breed.

it burrows through
the souls of men
and brings them to
a bitter end.

so run and hide
from shadows cast.
too late, you fool
the moment's passed.

you'll die like he
who came before,
while searching for
an exit door.

his thoughts were ripped
like insect legs
and to this day
still he begs.

but mercy is
not found within.
the darkness shows
its evil grin.

you wonder why
these words i've spread,
of evil spawned
within my head.

the reason is
so plain to see.
the dead just crave
some company.




To place a hand upon her hairless thigh
Was more a treat than just catching her eye;
Though eyeing up was how one did apply
Oneself to sparking dangerous romance -
But one cannot oblige and pass the chance
Of asking such a lady for a dance.

But how can two left feet impress in dance
When nerves appear on contact with her thigh?
I never thought that I would get the chance
To shake my booty-licous, catch her eye.
My moves are known to lead to no romance
So dancing lessons, I tried to apply.

So with this new knowledge could I apply
And take her hand and lead the dirty dance?
I did just that, and there came the romance -
From dance to dance, to bed and open thighs.
The hint was in the sparkle in her eye;
It always was a certain thing - no chance.

With everything so good I take no chance;
When told to double up I will apply
Another layer. Well, that caught her eye,
More than my lack of skill in modern dance.
I finally got in between her thighs -
And still, in fifteen minutes, was romance.

Three quarters of an hour passed, romance
Took a run for the hills, it took it’s chance
To escape through the window. While her thigh
Was still soaking, I tried hard to apply
All that I knew about the dirty dance.
I saw her out the corner of my eye

Wiping the tears out of sorry eyes;
How little did I know about romance!
It’s not just some overtly sexual dance.
Love’s much more exciting when just a chance!
It seems that to succeed you must apply
More than something hard between the thighs.

I know it was her thigh that caught my eye
Though I only applied for just romance;
But then what was the chance she’d take the dance?
#3
Bumped for more love.
Meadows
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#8
Sestina's are impressive in themselves because of how hard they are to write, I've only ever written one because it frustrated me.

And ultimately, I enjoyed it more than the first piece, which seemed a bit too much like something I had read before but with a few interesting things here and there.

I liked the ending of the first one more though.

Overall, blue.
#10
congrats, bro.

Meadows
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I release my inner liberal every morning when I take a shit.
Quote by SK8RDUDE411
I wont be like those jerks who dedicate their beliefs to logic and reaosn.