#1
Hey dudes my name is Patrick i'm 14 and this is my first riff
Constructive critisism would be appreciated the bass and drum thing isn't very good i know but i think i'll get better with time^^

hope there is nothing wrong with this thread im a n00b on UG
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actually awesome.zip
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#2
Uhh... I don't see anything. Well, I get a blank Guitar Pro window.
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#5
First of all, you don't need to brag about your age. Im 13 and I've made a lot of songs here, but I don't feel the need to say im 13.

Umm...that pattern is pretty cliche. Not much to say...its ok for a first riff though, the parts go together well...Ill give you that

Next, the most noobish thing to say on a forum is to say, "l hope there's nothin wrong with this thread, im a n00b on UG"

3rd of all, if you joined in december 07 you shouldnt be a noob anymore?

sorry if I sound rude, im a little cranky today, lol.
#6
yeah its my first so ill try to make somtin better l8tr
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#7
i havent been using ug very much and the age thing im not trying to brag
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#10
I also picked up my first guitar when i was 17.
As for the riff. Its a good first try.
But i actualy liked it better when i cut out the rhythm guitar, it got much more clean and... i donno, just didnt like the rhythm guitar, too simple maybe. Try make a more interesting rhythm. And yea, dont brag about your age or whatever.
#11
dudes sry for the age thing i wasnt trying to brag so stop mentioning it
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