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I wrote these the other night when I was high, trying to decide if I should incorporate them into my bands second demo CD. Both have many allusions to other artists and song titles.

Song 1:
Stumbling through the dark again
following the lights
my head starts to really spin
my minds at new heights
dreaming up scenarios
I see you in minds eye
eating all your Cheerios
because I'm so damn high

Lets leave and drive around
Lets blare the Rolling Stones
Hearts pumping to the sound
while were rolling stoned

Lets go to the hippies house
and talk philosophy
breathing seems so loud
and I've lost my car key
We can dabble in politics
while we smoke Camel Lights
exchange guitar licks
and share advice

Lets leave and drive around
Lets blare the Rolling Stones
Hearts pumping to the sound
while were rolling stoned


Any feedback would be much appreciated, I can never really judge my own writing but I'll be glad to check out other peoples lyrics.

Thanks.

EDIT: Okay, read the rules and I'm in compliance now... my bad.
Last edited by elementwood89 at May 26, 2008,
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