i usually play metal. but i wrote this. have a listen, tell me what you think.
it was played on a red maton phil emanuel sig.

song on profile (for hetha)
makes me feel like gettin high and playin ocarina of time...for some reason
'never a victim,' the role model said,
bang-bang, the bad guy is dead,
always a rockstar on eMpty TV,
the lesson complete, now the child has needs.
sounds good, but i'd use a classical guitar, work on my attack and work on the dynamics . you play everything at almost the same volume, try to bring out the important notes and soften the less important ones, and try to put some more 'life' into the playing.

other than that, good job !