Got bored so I wrote a song

*Use the RSE feature where available and turn human playing up full thanks.

Constructive criticism welcome .
Bright song.zip
Last edited by keith2k7 at May 26, 2008,
I like the happy progression. The leads are nice too, but at some parts they fade with the chord progression. You should make it longer too.

mind critting mine?(new one in sig) Thanks.