#1
Staring out the window, waiting for it all to fall
The whole worlds coming down, its coming down on top us all
Anticipate these things to come, standing back behind the door
I don't need you anymore, you're far too much to bargain for

You could be lonely
You could be crying
You could be anything
But you won't be smiling

And I won't be the one to tell you
I won't be the one to say
I won't be the one to tell you
It gets better everyday

Listen very closely, because they have so much to say
Let's just think about this, maybe we can meet halfway
Waiting for the sun to come, it never ceases to fall through
I think you got it all mixed up, I think you're just all too blue

Walking down the street
The pavement hits your feet
You find it all cliche
But you don't even know the time of day, but I know

You could be lonely
You could be crying
You could be anything
But you won't be smiling

And I won't be the one to tell you
I won't be the one to say
I won't be the one to tell you
It gets better everyday
It gets better everyday
#2
Staring out the window, waiting for it all to fall
The whole worlds coming down, its coming down on top us all
Anticipate these things to come, standing back behind the door
I don't need you anymore, you're far too much to bargain for


Good stanza, I liked it. My only complaint is the last line. The way "anymore" rhymes with "for" in the middle of the line doesn't really fit well, in my opinion.

You could be lonely
You could be crying
You could be anything
But you won't be smiling


I really liked this one. My favorite of the whole piece, the rhyming was really good, too.

And I won't be the one to tell you
I won't be the one to say
I won't be the one to tell you
It gets better everyday


I liked this one too, kinda gives off an eerie mood.

Listen very closely, because they have so much to say
Let's just think about this, maybe we can meet halfway
Waiting for the sun to come, it never ceases to fall through
I think you got it all mixed up, I think you're just all too blue


The rhyming for the first to lines kind of seemed forced, but that might just be me. Other than that, no complaints.

Walking down the street
The pavement hits your feet
You find it all cliche
But you don't even know the time of day, but I know


Maybe I missed something, but I don't really get what not knowing the time of day has to do with finding the pavement hitting your feet being cliche.

You could be lonely
You could be crying
You could be anything
But you won't be smiling


And I won't be the one to tell you
I won't be the one to say
I won't be the one to tell you
It gets better everyday
It gets better everyday


Overall, I really liked it. Mind critiquing mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=868785
And clenching your fist for the ones like us
Who are oppressed by the figures of beauty,
You fixed yourself, you said, "Well, never mind,
We are ugly, but we have the music."
#4
Staring out the window, waiting for it all to fall
The whole worlds coming down, its coming down on top us all
Anticipate these things to come, standing back behind the door
I don't need you anymore, you're far too much to bargain for

the ...bargain for line looks a little awkward on paper, but if it fits the melody comfortably i'd leave it.

You could be lonely
You could be crying
You could be anything
But you won't be smiling

A rhyme between the 1st and 3rd lines as well would have been tidyer,

And I won't be the one to tell you
I won't be the one to say
I won't be the one to tell you
It gets better everyday

I like this bit

Listen very closely, because they have so much to say
Let's just think about this, maybe we can meet halfway
Waiting for the sun to come, it never ceases to fall through
I think you got it all mixed up, I think you're just all too blue

this bits very good aswell


Walking down the street
The pavement hits your feet
You find it all cliche
But you don't even know the time of day, but I know

You could be lonely
You could be crying
You could be anything
But you won't be smiling

And I won't be the one to tell you
I won't be the one to say
I won't be the one to tell you
It gets better everyday
It gets better everyday

fade out with repeats? or into a solo quile the words are repeating? that's how i'd end it!