#1
What makes me so different from you?
I'm just a person like you
youve excile me make and me look like an outsider.
Just coz ive better things to do

Just hold on, your on the other side.
I'm not gonna bail you out this time.
I'm a person just like you.
But ive got better things things to do.

I'll admit that what we started was a.
Mistake, but i can't say i regret.
It's not just something you can turn away and.
forget, it's gotta last a lifetime.

Just hold on, your on the other side.
I'm not gonna bail you out this time.
I'm a person just like you.
But ive got better things things to do.

I know it's gonna be a little hard.
At first, youve just gotta hold on.
Not give in, when your under.
Pressure holding me down..

Just hold on, your on the other side.
I'm not gonna bail you out this time.
I'm a person just like you.
But ive got better things things to do.

You may think that your something.
better just that step above me.
But in reality your the one sniffing glue.
I don't mind coz ive just got better things to do.

Just hold on, your on the other side.
I'm not gonna bail you out this time.
I'm a person just like you.
But ive got better things things to do.


It's about drug abuse.
And how it drives people socially insane.
I'm Straight Edge but i think it's unlike your normal straight edge song.
yeah crit please.
I love white guitars!
#3
Please read the rules in the announcement at the top of this forum.

I'll report only this thread, so your other one can stay alive, IF you edit your bump on that one and address the comment by another user on it. Thank him, answer any questions he may have had, clarify something, w/e. It's not possible for you to do that on this one, as there was no crit or comment by another user to your piece.

If your don't edit your other bump within a few hours, I'll have to report that one too.


seriously, read the rules.
Good luck,
SYK


*reported*


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#4
Quote by SomeoneYouKnew
Please read the rules in the announcement at the top of this forum.

I'll report only this thread, so your other one can stay alive, IF you edit your bump on that one and address the comment by another user on it. Thank him, answer any questions he may have had, clarify something, w/e. It's not possible for you to do that on this one, as there was no crit or comment by another user to your piece.

If your don't edit your other bump within a few hours, I'll have to report that one too.

seriously, read the rules.
Good luck,
SYK

*reported*

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Dude, calm down, its one bump. Give the guy a break.

Anyway, i liked the piece. Its a really great topic and i enjoyed it a lot. Just check your wording in the first stanza. Some words aren't in the right spot. Anyway, nice job on the piece. Really great. Keep up the good work. Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=14529103#post14529103 Thx. Great job. Keep up the good work.