#1
ok so i was sitting in my room at about 12:45 and i told myself i wasnt going to sleep with out writting something down that was even remotly good yea that was a mistake... 6:45 the next morning this hit me!!! and my paper is still soggy from writting down in the shower.... haha im still getting weird looks from people in the lab when they see my page all smeared and junked up!!! ahahahaa

The City Sleeps In Flames

I spent days
fighting your battles with no sleep
and as I do recall
you said that you'd weep
on my grave if I fall
but you want weep at all
the city sleeps in flames

** Chorus**
You look to me with open arms
remembering all the good times we had
and how you just turned away
the city sleeps in flames

**verse 2**
what object of faith
would lead you to believe
that this was the right way
and as I look on and burning buildings fall
I see that you were wrong
the city sleeps in flames

** chorus**

** break**
as fire rains down from heaven above
you look to god wishing for love
but he just turned away
the city sleeps in flames

**chorus**
Quote by emagdnimasisiht
I had skittles and I asked the girl next to me if she wanted some and she said "No way I hate skittles" and turned around. She turned around and her arsecrack was showing so I poured some skittles in there.
#2
Dude that ****ing rocks
Quote by SharpSpoon
I think I can safely say I would still bang her knowing this information.


Lmao ^

Grundy0 > Cancer!
#3
quite good indeed!

Epi Les Paul Std w/Duncans
ESP LTD EX260
Cry Baby From Hell
Marshall JH-1
EHX Metal Muff
MXR EVH Phase 90
Carl Martin Classic Chorus
EHX #1 Echo
Ibanez LU-20
Dunlop DCB-10
Crate V50112
Tascam US144


PEDALBOARD JUNKIES
#4
good but the title is the name of a scary kids scaring kids song

Left hand man of the fargoth fanclub! PM lamafunguy to join.

Quote by InvaderTSN
Better yet. "My arm is tired, could I put it in between your legs so I can sexually violate you during the movie?"
Quote by Irnmaiden4life
lets watch this thread die like i should have on page 1
#5
/\ actually yea... i know that now... the song is on my ipod but i wasnt thinking of it at the time..... wats something i could call it???
Quote by emagdnimasisiht
I had skittles and I asked the girl next to me if she wanted some and she said "No way I hate skittles" and turned around. She turned around and her arsecrack was showing so I poured some skittles in there.
#6
i dont think you should have 2 lines ending with fall, it sounds forced in my opinion. other then that its pretty good, mine is set up basically like yours is, crit it for me if you would its in my sig
#7
you could call it "the reason i always get blamed"

Left hand man of the fargoth fanclub! PM lamafunguy to join.

Quote by InvaderTSN
Better yet. "My arm is tired, could I put it in between your legs so I can sexually violate you during the movie?"
Quote by Irnmaiden4life
lets watch this thread die like i should have on page 1