#2
Did you do everything? The singing in particular is great.
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#5
Dude...Did you record all that? Like the guitar and piano? Because everything sounds so awesome. Your voice isn't the same, but it fits cool, its got a little like dracula sound or something haha I'm sorry if thats offensive it sounds cool. 9.5/10. Some of the piano parts are a little different, but they sound good too. I didn't like the outro as much as I liked the rest of the song, its hard to sing though, I know.

crit me?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=864880
#6
holy fark-a-duck! i totally wasn't expecting that!
i thought my vocals were sh!thouse... and thats the best i've ever done vocally, but thanks a lot for the responses

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Did you do everything? The singing in particular is great.

i did everything except piano. i transposed it, dropped it down a semitone (cause i can't sing as high as the original yet) and gave it to a uni mate who did it... then i went in and touched it up cause his playing wasn't 100% perfect but close.

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Dude...Did you record all that? Like the guitar and piano? Because everything sounds so awesome. Your voice isn't the same, but it fits cool, its got a little like dracula sound or something haha I'm sorry if thats offensive it sounds cool. 9.5/10. Some of the piano parts are a little different, but they sound good too. I didn't like the outro as much as I liked the rest of the song, its hard to sing though, I know.

yeah, as i said above that i did everything except for the piano.

thanks for the vocal comment, no offense taken. i was more expecting everyone to say "your vocals need a lot of work". i've been singing for about 8 months and guitar for 2 and a half... i wish i started singing when i started guitar, but i'm here i am now and i can only get better.

the outro was freaking hard to get, but i got as close as i could because i was going insane trying to replicate it.

thanks again for the feedback i'll check out ur works soon.
Last edited by Hadeed at May 27, 2008,
#7
A great cover. My biggest peeves with it are, it sounds like you say "porn-lease" instead of "police", and some of the piano is off during the chorus; but I see that you didn't do the piano. Good work overall.
#8
lol! nice one! perhaps its my subconscious kicking in and demanding i want porn to lease..?
or maybe my aussie accent.

i guess its like in fall out boy's song that says "this ain't a scene its a GOD DAMN ASS FACE!" :P

cheers
#9
Thats one of the best Karma Police covers ive seen in a while, instruments were spot on and the voice was fabulous! The ending is hard to replicate I agree but you did a good job at making it sound good and i liked the outcome!

Only thing i could pick out would be that it would be cool to have the acoustic guitar playing during the piano bits in "This is what you get (Piano bit)" if you know what I mean, but thats very insignificant so judging thats only thing I can find you did very well!

Now onto Paranoid Android!

Ohh and please check out my RH cover of "You" need some tips and judging by your voice you may have some hehe!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=868435
#10
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Thats one of the best Karma Police covers ive seen in a while, instruments were spot on and the voice was fabulous! The ending is hard to replicate I agree but you did a good job at making it sound good and i liked the outcome!

Only thing i could pick out would be that it would be cool to have the acoustic guitar playing during the piano bits in "This is what you get (Piano bit)" if you know what I mean, but thats very insignificant so judging thats only thing I can find you did very well!

Now onto Paranoid Android!

Ohh and please check out my RH cover of "You" need some tips and judging by your voice you may have some hehe!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=868435


thanks, I actually have an electric guitar very weak in the mix doing the little piano melody part that you're speaking off... i guess its not as clear using the internet streaming system.

paranoid android, um... **** that! i'd love to but thats just too busy. i can play it and sing some of it... maybe some time down the track i'll do it.
#11
ace!
can't say much... u did an awesome job. i wont say that your voice is radioheadish.... the higher part at the end wasnt as good as the rest.