#1
Disinterest evokes this

Affection correction

My face is so heated

With these names repeated

Out of the past

Picked up the last

Forget it

I shouldn't have pictured it

Shame and annoyance

Really quite obvious

Will not condone

This insolence alone

Apparently I'm inferior

Look in the mirror

Don't mind the cliche

Vote me in the gray



No outburst of fury

No symptoms of shock

No reason to hurry

No feelings to lock



Time is of essence

When feeling so leery

Nothing is talked

Hearts are all blocked

Give me a chisel

Give me your hand

Are you now bleeding?

Or are you a brand

Of petty sex chances

And trivial romances

And forgotten trances

And secret said glances?

Your horse is roaming

To give you a warning

Your dog is foaming

But you can't stop coming



No outburst of fury

No symptoms of shock

No reason to hurry

No feelings to lock



Spare me, oh lord

I've been so goddamn bored

Don't leave it up to me

'Cause I'll just up and leave

****ing tear away

It's not like its once a day

I've lived this way for years

Laughing to rid my tears

Give me that sick feeling

Hammer my heart

I don't believe it

So rip me apart



Gun metal sounds so good

I'll share some if you would like

To see your god all blue

And strangled by his mic



No outburst of fury

No symptoms of shock

No reason to hurry

No feelings to lock
#2
this entire thing is beautiful except
"
Gun metal sounds so good

I'll share some if you would like

To see your god all blue

And strangled by his mic"

that came from nowhere.
i just dont think it fits

honestly though, if you omit that
it sounds wonderful and HONEST

cheers
~b