#1
You can hear the song here. Golden Arm

I heat the spoon
Heat the needle too
Turn the lights down
And the pictures of my family around
Am I lying to you or
Finally telling the truth?

I've got a golden arm
You can't do me no harm
Like a map the marks
Will lead you back to my heart
The place where
This all starts

I feel like Jesus' son
Always the chosen one
The quiet saint with a mind
Full of waste
In truth I never really ever
Found my way

And if they find me
Dead at twenty three
Will they feel relieved now that
They don't have to worry
No more
#2
You can't do me no harm


I tripped on the double negative. Intentional or not I feel it has to go. I suppose you can say it characterises the narrator or whatnot, but being a grammar perfectionist, yeah. I'd change it.

Pretty nice rhyme throughout. I felt the flow lost its way in verse three, maybe it was the sibilance of "jesus' son" that got me.

Good read, good listen, good stuff.