#1
We just wrote this, and we tried to make it like the Beastie Boys. Can we get some harsh criticism please?


"Molls to Da Walls"

- Guy #A, feat. Guy #B.....whoever ends up mixing this.


Yo I don't think I'ma sleep tonight
Just found the Holy Grail of all pickup lines.
I'ma share it with you but lets keep it tight
So sit down lay back choke a Marlboro Light.

Check this, flashback - Ithaca, last fall.
Cute fresh was freshin her day at Day Hall.
I really didn't know what to make from it all
She wasn't feelin my charm - made me drop the ball.

I rebound, round two, slipped me her digits.
Called her once but she didn't pick it.
Two-time got the voicemail call
this time I said, "molls to da walls."


[Chorus]
Take her to the halls, and tell her "molls to da walls."
Take her to the halls, and tell her "molls to da walls."
Take her to the halls, and tell her "molls to da walls."
If you got the balls son, tell her "molls to da walls."


[Guy #A]
Yo, check it: True Story, G.
Reminicin the remedy at CTB.
Sittin 4 o'clock from this red-haired dame.
She was staring at me like Miami Police,
investigatin and tryin to get my name.
I hand her my phone, and I let her know,
Sometime tonight girl, Ima give you a call,
And all I said was, "Molls to da walls."


[Chorus]
Take her to the halls, and tell her "molls to da walls."
Take her to the halls, and tell her "molls to da walls."
Take her to the halls, and tell her "molls to da walls."
If you got the balls son, tell her "molls to da walls."


[Guy #A]
That night I peeped her dancin her own beat.
Shootin that strut like she was Jolie.
I don't blame her, after what I see:
There were only twenty-six sixes, two of two tens for me.
I only talk to tens, that my main creed.
So I took Molls to center-floor with her girlfriend "E"


[Guy #B - with deeper voice]
Yo, yo....
Seek it straight stunna, from a stunna's lip:
All the haters be trippin, when I'm trippin the trip.
All the ladies be tippin, when I'm whippin the whip.
All the frat boys are clueless about my latest trick:
"Molls to da walls" is all I tell the chicks.

(yeah!)

Molly's got a wild side,
so let me tell you about her.
She got on top of my counter,
and danced to "boots with da furr."
But don't get me wrong, she's a real classy gurrr
She a beauty in a beauty, so keep your hands off her.
We could use another Russian cutie and that's a fact.
So frat her a good frat, and she'll frat you right back.


[Guy #A]
So then this same-game lame with his backwards hat,
tells her he likes to "fraternize..."
Kid, why you tryin to ****-block my rap?
Get some real game but let me re-emphasize:


[Chorus]
Take her to the halls, and tell her "molls to da walls."
Take her to the halls, and tell her "molls to da walls."
Take her to the halls, and tell her "molls to da walls."
If you got the balls son, tell her "molls to da walls."


[Guy #A]
Boys all around trying to mack my dime.
This girl's got standards, she ain't got time to grind.
She's with me tonight, so if you don't mind,
Learn the 4 words and get outta my rhyme.
#2
I think this is a guitar site, where most of the people like metal and such. If you're looking for harsh criticism, you'll get it.

Just a warning is all.
#3
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I think this is a guitar site, where most of the people like metal and such. If you're looking for harsh criticism, you'll get it.

Just a warning is all.



it'll be set to guitars and drums in the background. it's not like gangsta rap or anything.
#4
I lol'd. But that was actually pretty good. Creative without being too too cheesy.
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#5
Ya know what, i actually liked this!
And i don't listen to such sorta rap.
But it was pretty cool n sorta funny.
Had a great rhythm to it and i could rap it all the way to the end.

So yeah, don't mind if this is a guitar site. Doesn't mean you've gotta only write rock and metal songs. As long as its got rhythm and rhymes, it's all fine!
#6
Its total money. I read it just like I would listen to a Beastie Boys song and its great. Its tough to give some harsh criticism when I enjoyed it so much... dont know what molls to da walls means but I'm guessing its supposed remain vague and left up to the imagination, I dig it though. I say record it already and then make an awesome/hilarious/crazy Beastie Boys style music video for it.
#7
I'm going to stay as open as possible when I say this... the first ten lines or so was good, but you lost me from there. I don't know what molls are, and I take it you didn't typo that many times... i dunno.
And as far as the style, it definitly feels out of place, even if it's going to have guitars n' such. Guitar-based bands aren't comprised of "G's".