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Hey. It's been a while since I've been here. Going with a bit of a different style here. I felt a little bit of hip hop/beat box on this one. Let me know what you think. C4C as always, leave me a link or let me know which one to check out. Thanks guys.

Words of Mass Destruction

pinpricks cause tsunamis on the golden streets of page,
learn to snap and hold a beat, recite it up on stage.
writing true and holding dear
the words I singsong out
hold my flow and jam with me
you know what it's all about

music as a weapon
to keep my peace of mind
death and violence all about
just look and you will find
words to keep you happy
and tune to keep you kind
music links us all together
we all stay intertwined

load my shotgun full of
nifty words and phrases
deaf dumb and blind you act but
the question that I raise is
when you see me aimed at you
will you run and hide out?
or will you turn around and sing with me,
sing it all out loud!

music as a weapon
to keep my peace of mind
death and violence all about
just look and you will find
words to keep you happy
and tune to keep you kind
music links us all together
we all stay intertwined

music as a weapon
to keep us in the clear
music as a weapon to
chase away the fear
music all around us now
to keep us all together
music comes to save us now
protect us all forever

music as a peacemaker
to keep my peace of mind
words to keep us happy
so we all stay intertwined
music as a weapon
to fight back all the hate
music as the binding glue
to let us meet our fate
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pinpricks cause tsunamis on the golden streets of page,
learn to snap and hold a beat, recite it up on stage.
writing true and holding dear
the words I singsong out
hold my flow and jam with me
you know what it's all about

really strong opener, a bit wprdy, and it would be hard to sing, but i think you could nail it.

music as a weapon
to keep my peace of mind
death and violence all about
just look and you will find
words to keep you happy
and tune to keep you kind
music links us all together
we all stay intertwined


very nice man i liked it alot.

load my shotgun full of
nifty words and phrases
deaf dumb and blind you act but
the question that I raise is
when you see me aimed at you
will you run and hide out?
or will you turn around and sing with me,
sing it all out loud!


umm i liked the benning, but the end kinda lost my intrest.

music as a weapon
to keep my peace of mind
death and violence all about
just look and you will find
words to keep you happy
and tune to keep you kind
music links us all together
we all stay intertwined

DUDE< took the words outta my mouth,

music as a weapon
to keep us in the clear
music as a weapon to
chase away the fear
music all around us now
to keep us all together
music comes to save us now
protect us all forever

music as a peacemaker
to keep my peace of mind
words to keep us happy
so we all stay intertwined
music as a weapon
to fight back all the hate
music as the binding glue
to let us meet our fate


very strong closer!

nice man if you could sing it right, could be big! 8/10
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