#1
I'm having problems naming this, hence the untitledness of it. So don't sue me, Simple Plan.

Anywho, I threw this together of old, tired, recycled riffs and what not. The bass in the interlude was changed a few times, now I wish I stuck with the original lines.

So do tell me how much you
A) Enjoy this
B) Dislike this

And offer any suggestions
Attachments:
Untitled.zip
#2
I thought this was pretty cool. nice hardedge riffs ya got there. the interlude was especially awesome. though the bass solo part was awkwardly placed...guitar solo wasn't very technical but I still thought it was very well written. overall, I really liked the dark and heavy sound of this song. good job.

and could you crit mine? I don't have a link but it's an acoustic song on the first page.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...