#1
Hey guys, it's been a while since I submitted anything but I'm really excited about this one.

I've been working on it for about 2 weeks and I finally have it almost to where I want it. The end is something I may want to work on later unless it gets decent reviews from you guys =P

I don't know where the inspiration came for this one, but you can all come up with what you think it sounds like. I'm really happy with how it came out.

Crit 4 crit as always =D
Attachments:
Song409.zip
#3
I really like your lead parts, they flow really well. Not to mention the way you write your rhythms. Its very solid metalcore. Measures 63-70 is nasty I wish that was extended more. On the clean part please elaborate that solo. It just feels like it should be longer.

Crit4crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=871481
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
#4
I love those leads. The section mentioned above, from bar 63-70 is win.
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Last edited by Gyroscope at Jun 1, 2008,