#1
This is my attempt at making lyrics that go with death metal, without sounding like an angry 5 year old ranting about how much he hates God and Loves Satan, or a sick serial rapist who.... well.... rapes dead people.

It's not finished yet, I have 2 verses so far, developments will be posted a.s.a.p. The structure is based around the 'demo song' on my profile.


Descend the almighty rain,
At the eve of triumph and serenity,
With favour of gods and pardon of sins,
With all-seeing eyes and dexterity.

Bring winds of Divinity,
Carry out the will of the gods,
'Shou shalt not kill' forever in doubt,
Persist with Putrid Ignorance.


tell me what you think, any feedback is appreciated, as long as you're not just saying 'you suck' if you think that, say why.
#5
Nergal, much ?

Not a bad thing.
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#8
Quote by \m/Gaz
This is my attempt at making lyrics that go with death metal, without sounding like an angry 5 year old ranting about how much he hates God and Loves Satan


Uhm, you're confusing your death metal with your black metal.