#1
Hey all.

Got a song I've started on here, not finished (obviously), and I dont really know where to go next. I'm not really sure what I want for a chorus, but I know I want a chorus next...

Well, critique what I have and whatnot... I'll update as needed.
Attachments:
Spiral.zip
Quote by MoogleRancha
It's like Fenriz and J. Read

"I'm so happy to love metal and stuff"

"I AM metal"
#2
I say use a variation of the intro.

Or maybe, a big keyboard jam with held power chords.
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory