#1
In that hospital bed
I tried to clear my head
When I heard a child’s loud cry
and a mother’s last goodbye

And now its you I see
Lying in that bed asleep
Wake up one more time
And remember my smile

8 years is too long now
Don’t take your last bow
Ill make it up to you
I’m going to see you soon

And now its you I see
Lying in that bed asleep
Wake up one more time
And remember my smile

When this is all said and done
Will you be proud of mum?
Of how she raised us three
I’m sure you’ll be pleased

And now its you I see
Lying in that bed asleep
Wake up one more time
And remember my smile
MY GEAR

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#2
A couple small complaints:
1) The end of line 8 sticks out like a sore thumb.
2) So, it's mum speaking to daughter? I'd like to see the characters hammered out a bit more.
Other than those minor complaints, excellent work.