#1
just a song i put together. Its not done, i hate the chorus, not in a good order, i just wanna know if its any good before i actually put effort into it.

Im not to sure what the genre is
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Melodic Black Metal.zip
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#2
It was pretty catchy.

I really liked it, actually.
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#3
I didn't really get into it until the "interlude -> first solo -> third verse" part, but once it got there, I had to go get my guitar so I could learn it, hah. The other parts weren't bad, I just feel like they need a little "spice" or something? But I really liked the sections towards the end.
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less headroom than the windsor head? what, does it distort before you plug it in?

#4
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I didn't really get into it until the "interlude -> first solo -> third verse" part, but once it got there, I had to go get my guitar so I could learn it, hah. The other parts weren't bad, I just feel like they need a little "spice" or something? But I really liked the sections towards the end.



yeah i understand what you mean completely. Yeah i basically had a melo death song then took the chords and made it kinda black metal. I just need to work on the order and everything. haha im not to crazy about the chorus second guitar but whatever haha. I appreciate the criticism
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#5
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I appreciate the criticism


Anytime! With some work, I think this could really come out great. As far as me having anything to look at, I don't really have anything of my own. Most of what I've "written" I either forget as soon as I put the guitar down, or realize that I'm subconsciously ripping off a song I've heard before, haha And usually, when I sit down and try to write something, it feels forced, and I'm never a fan of what I come up with. Oh well, some day.
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less headroom than the windsor head? what, does it distort before you plug it in?

#6
definitely not black metal lol, its not even close to dark enough sounding. its definitely melodeath if anything.

interlude was good stuff tho