#1
i try to forget about you
but only for tonight
hoping that tomorrow
will make everything right

i know im too attached to you
inside my head
i can't stop thinking about you though
and it'll be my death

in this game, that i was played
it's russian roulete
I keep pulling the trigger
but im not dead yet

CHORUS
you've got my heart
strings tangled
like a marionette
that's still faithful
to the puppeteer
that's why you're here
i'm just a pawn
and you can play me all night long

i guess i should give you some space
but there's so many miles between you and me
i went up there to see your pretty face
i thought that it would make you happy

but i guess i was wrong
and though the journey was long
i wasted a day
and i lost my way

Chorus.
Last edited by wyoming_soldier at Jun 28, 2008,
#2
i try to forget about you
but only for tonight
hoping that tomorrow
will make every right *everything?

i know im too attached to you
i know is usually unnecessary. if it stands without it, considered dropping it.
inside my head
i can't stop thinking about you though
though looks tacked on to hide the fact that it ends in you, as does the first line of this.
and it'll be my death

and in this that you played me
this reads poorly.
it's russian roulete
the trigger keeps on pulling
the trigger pulls? or do you mean you pull the trigger?
but im not dead yet

CHORUS
you've got my heart
strings tangled
like a mareonete *marionette
that's still faithful
to the puppeteer
that's why you're here
i'm just a pawn
but you can play me all night long
but is out of place. you'd use it if this contradicted the previous. it doesn't.
try using and instead. or just drop it without replacement.


i guess i should give you some space
but there's so many miles between you and me
i went up there to see your pretty face
i thought that it would make you happy

but i guess i was wrong
and though the journey was long
i wasted a day
and i lost my way

Chorus.
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