#1
Hey Yeah i just recently wrote these lyrics and i was wondering is they are any good or not Give me some FEEDBACK!


Chorus

Siting her knowing
that its not working
its killing me from inside
Ripping me apart
but whos to blame
cause pictures still the same

Verse

It might not seem like it
But i F***ing do
i dont hate you
i just need to come through

Verse 2

Back here again
i know im to blame
i can tell whats inside
But its all the same

Outro

The Pictures fallen down
Cracked in two
But the remains are still here
waiting for you

yeah the order is pretty obvious

Chorus
verse
Chorus
Verse 2
Outro

Yeah Any Feedback will be appreciated

and no one copy them if they do i will come a rape you!


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#3
Please read the rules in the announcement at the top of this forum.
title doesn't refer to anything in the piece. looks like an attention-getter.
bumping? no way. Rules. read them before posting again in S&L.

Good luck,
SYK


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