#2
Tone needs work, otherwise Paper Wings is spot on, Rumors though, you're missing a chord in the main riff.


It should look something like this


12 12 10 12 10 5 5 5
12 12 10 12 10 5 5 5
10 10 8  10 8  3 3 5


and so on
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