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This is a song I wrote and I'm planning to put guitar in it soon. I think it siuts an emo, post-hardcore style, with screaming and all that stuff. Please tell me what you think.

Tonight the heart will bleed
Leaving me marked, leaving me scarred
Leaving sorrow behind

Oh, when I thought I walked this path alone
Cursed the time I dared to say goodbye
And left everything behind

Shine a light in the sky, my love
I'll follow your star
(I'll follow your scar)

Bathed in silver light and pouring rain
Cursed the time I dared to say goodbye
To leave everything behind

Oh, how I long for deep rest
Blades inside my wrist
My bleeding dreams scream at me

Shine a light in the sky, my love
I'll follow your star
(I'll follow your scar)
Fire a gun in the night, my love
I'll shoot down a star
And bleed out your scar
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That penis guitar. Hell, i'd wank it.


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