#1
Tell me what you think, I might add more as this one is still a work in progress =) c4c as always


So tell me witch

If you were to burn at the stake
Shall I burn alongside you my dear?
Sparks turn to fire, but fire to ashes
So do us both a favor and put out that match
#3
It's a nice beginning, though I have no idea where it's leading to. I'd like to read more of the story I think you are trying to tell, because I don't think this is all.
And what is more, there's been a bloody purple nose and some bloody purple clothes that were messing up the lobby floor. It's just apartment house rules so all you 'partment fools remember : one man's ceiling is another man's floor.