#1
I have this good intro + pre-verse/chorus.
I may give this to the band to play.

I think it sounds good so far.

Put both guitars on RSE (Screamer Overdrive)
Leave the Drums on MIDI.

(if possible, that is).

c4c all the way!

thank you.
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aa_2.zip
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#4
Quote by Habs
No.

i asked for help.

n00b.
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#5
Do more with both guitars. If it was me, I would add a chuggy riff. (As I Lay Dying) Its not a bad start but please change the D# Octave chord. Anyways take a look at my stuff if you would please...it might help you.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=871481
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470