#1
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I'm feelin out of control
and I'll do
what I must do
its too late to stop and
I won't til I'm through

I won't look back
I'm still runnin from my past
(I can't seem to hide from my memories)
time after time
you lied right to my face
(i can't believe you said that **** to me)

I should of stopped
before it was too late
I should've tried
to open up the gate

im feelin out of control
and i'll do
what i must do
its too late too stop and
i won't til im through

Get out of my way
im out of control
im unstoppable

get out of my way
cuz slowin me down
is impossible

i won't look back
im still runnin from my past
(i can't seem to hide from my memories)
time after time
you lied right to my face
(i can't believe you said that **** to me)

I should of stopped
before it was too late
I should've stopped
to open up the gate

im feelin out of control
and i'll do
what i must do
its too late too stop and
i won't til im through
#2
I really liked this a lot. I liked the topic, liked the style, and liked the originality. I can't think of anything that you could improve on. It was very well-written. Great job on everything. Crit mine? Its called Some Things Last Forever. Sorry i can't get you a link but it should be on the first page. Anyway, nice job. Keep up the good work.

P.S. What style is this song? I'd love to know.