Vocals are definitely very pitchy, though I can see you have a good voice under it all. Guitar playing was pretty solid.

The song seems well put together though. If you can nail the vocals I think you've got some winners on your hands.
Last edited by Khann at Jun 1, 2008,
Over all liked the song and most of the time your singing was good just at the end of your bars you tend to fall off a bit.

Gutted didn't get to see the loop jams.