#1
Crit4Crit

and yes, snowblind911, i expect you to crit this bud

Verse
Alone i walk on the ocean plank
where hidden lies and shadows wait
People die and then realize
that behind their eyes, is the evil face
that steals and laughs at the human race

Forever we are gullible, thats why
now is the time to hide away
all the **** and everything at bay
and realize that this burning light,
is the essence of our wasted time
Spent living unhappy lives

Chorus
Hidden we have lost ourselves,
alive we have ****ed ourselves
and sent us into the black hole,
of another mans wallet

Verse
We all expect, to do well in school
no matter what we can drown in a pool
accidents happen, and people die
the fair ladies of family's will cry
but we do move on, and still today
we have not thrown humanity away

Chorus
Hidden we have lost ourselves
Alone we have fought ourselves
we cry as time fades out
in the back of eternity

Bridge
We all expect where to go,
and if we dont know
we question others as they have failed us
Blowing up buildings and fighting wars
peoples still hear this **** behind bars
dont know whats right or wrong
all we understand is the tragedy

Verse
For all i know it could have been you
the one that tripped and fell into a pool
of hidden answers and deathly lies
the ocean looks so lonely out there
better hop in

Chorus
Hidden we have found ourselves
Hidden we have found ourselves
the ocean is really an allusion
the allusion of pure confusion

Hidden we have allowed ourselves,
hidden we have survived ourselves

yay
Call me Sean
Quote by Nilpferdkoenig
He's just trying to protect our innocence.


Yes i am
Quote by :Vicious--

Your flirting powers are incredible.



Gear:
Schecter S1 Elite Black Cherry (Soapbar Neck, Invader Bridge)
Schecter Banshee
Orange Dual Terror
Boss CE-5
Goatkeeper
Last edited by Guitarplaya27 at Jun 1, 2008,
#2
was that yay part of the song? Anyway, i liked this much more than hell is beyond thy shoulder. This flows very well and is very well written. Much, much better. Nice job. Keep up the good work.

P.S. Btw, you put digital delay twice in your sig. yea, i notice that kind of stuff lol. once again, nice job.
Last edited by grevhead221 at Jun 1, 2008,
#3
Thanks bud,

and no the yay was just saying
"i finished the ****ing song"

but thanks you, i appreciate it
Call me Sean
Quote by Nilpferdkoenig
He's just trying to protect our innocence.


Yes i am
Quote by :Vicious--

Your flirting powers are incredible.



Gear:
Schecter S1 Elite Black Cherry (Soapbar Neck, Invader Bridge)
Schecter Banshee
Orange Dual Terror
Boss CE-5
Goatkeeper
#4
Hehe, hey =] I'll be back for this.

I need to do some homework and grab lunch, but I'll be back eventually.
O! music: Click (Youtube)


^ Click to see an acoustic arrangement of Ke$ha's 'Your Love is my Drug' - everyone's favourite song.
#5
very good i like this one alot. there are a few parts that i would probably change but other than that it was awesome
Quote by syyz1
I'm on my period, wearing no sort of protection, naked on a white chair

Quote by *Juno*
I put my balls inside the sound hole and strummed myself to ectasy

Quote by °☻°
I like it hairy, that way i can play welcome to the jungle while i have sex!