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imgooley
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#1
I'm bored, so lets write some lyrics. Originals or ones that fit together are fine.

For example, say I post a line. The next poster comes up with a line to follow. Lets see how many verses we can come up with.

I'll start.

I'm All out of luck, nothin goin right for me (x2)
pwrmax
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#2
I need ya to come, and set me free
imgooley
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#6
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Good idea, except what happens now? Post-rule wise?

Once a verse is finished, I guess we start a new one. It would be nice if we could make it fit within the context of the starting verse, and when it seems like that one is finished, we can start a new theme.

Sound good?
Pink Zeptallica
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#11
Keep the total song so far up the top in first post?

EDIT: I'm lying here in a heap

sorry I have never tryed to write a song so sorry if it's a bit weird
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imgooley
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#12
^Basically, what we are trying to do is make verses that fit a common aesthetic. It's easier to just do the call and response type verses, so I guess once a verse is completed, we can start another one.

I woke up this morning, and then I went back to sleep X2
Pray to God for my soul to keep

is what we have so far.

Come up with a new verse
slidething31
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#13
I tripped over my woman, and i stubbed my toe x2

Now I'm bleedin, all cause of that ho
Pink Zeptallica
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#17
One day I might just go out and break my spleen.


hahahahaha
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Quote by metacarpi
Do it once, it's a mistake.

Keep doing it, it's Jazz.


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I remember when I was really young, I had a wet dream in which i was being dragged along an urban countryside by a pickup truck.
ze monsta
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#20
I never done got lucky, I just never could.

But I wake up next mornin round break o day,
Roll into the pillow where she used to lay.
imgooley
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Growl like an animal, waitin for a purrrr.

Where are you going with that?
ze monsta
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#26
I have no idea...It's an idea taken from a Soledad Brother's song...Face it your ideas were a bit generic...

We should start again, coz I'm getting bored of lame ass calls, and making epic responses.

Here goes:

I went down to the train station with my rucksack in my hand,
Crowd of girls run crying mister won't you be my man.
Last edited by ze monsta at Jun 2, 2008,
imgooley
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#27
0k

um...

My Car broke down, I'm stranded on the side of the road
It's 2 in the mornin, and I got such a heavy load
I need to get out of this place, before my ass gets caught
ze monsta
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#28
Ignore my post then lolz.

mr railroad man, let a poor boy ride the line.
I say please mr railroad man, let a poor boy ride the line.
He said you know I wouldn't mind it son, but you know these trains aint mine.
slidething31
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#30
Quote by ze monsta

mr railroad man, let a poor boy ride the line.
I say please mr railroad man, let a poor boy ride the line.
He said you know I wouldn't mind it son, but you know these trains aint mine.


Well when that man turned away, I hopped on that train
When that man turned away, jumped straight on that train
Ohh, got caught by the poolice man, now i'm back in jail again
MrBlues
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#31
Hope this fits, havent written much.

Ive now been here a long long time,
Damn straight that what i said just way too long,
getting more down by the day now, i hardly even remember what i did wrong.
Feelin the Blues


"The Blues are a simple music and I'm a simple man. But the Blues aren't a science, the Blues can't be broken down like a mathematics. The Blues are a mystery, and mysteries are never as simple as they look" - BB King
imgooley
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#32
Why was I runnin, tryin to get away?
From what, I really can't say
Ridin the rails, in the darkness of night,
Singin this same old lonesome song
ze monsta
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#33
^There is always one that insists on breaking the pattern...

Railroad blues got me, got me turnin in my bed.
Railroad blues got me, got me turnin in my bed.
These railroad blues got me, n now I'm wanted for dead.
Last edited by ze monsta at Jun 3, 2008,
imgooley
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#36
Whatever, gus. You said you wanted a break from the conventional lyrics and I tried to do them.
ze monsta
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#37
Nah, I meant that the topic was generic. I think we need to agree to stick to one type of verse ie.

Two lines (the same two) and then a third line. For example:

They call it stormy monday, but tuesday is just as bad.
They call it stormy monday, but tuesdays are just as bad.
And wednesday is worst and thursday is oh so sad.
imgooley
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#38
...

idk...

That's true, but then you have songs like Leave My Girl Alone that follow that pattern and then break out of it.