#1
*Inspired by a WoW-craving, and vikings/paganism*

March Of The Horde

(guitar intro)

Raise your hammers to the sky
Because this world is ours this time
March forth, my people, do not cry
In the end, you will scream
"Victory is mine!!!"

Raise your heads to meet my eyes
I will give you, the strength to survive
Kill 'em all, and laugh as they die
For the horde, We sing one more time!

[Chorus:]
The ground trembles,
as they take their final steps,
as the walls crumble
as the people meet their death

March forth,
the march of the horde

the heat of battle is all but pleasing
blade to your enemies' throats
as they sit there weezing

death by the sword
respect thy lord
march forth,
THE MARCH OF THE HORDE!
[Chorus end]

He sits upon his throne,
armed and clad in gold
staring down his enemies
Their corpses grow cold

...and here is where i need some suggestions to add to the song...possibly something that talks about this "empire" being toppled? constructive criticism welcome!
Last edited by Patty-cakez at Apr 4, 2009,
#2
I like that
Chorus seems a bit long compared to the rest, why not shorten it and use the rest for another verse? The chorus can always be reused.
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#5
Add "because" to the beginning of the second to last line in the first verse.
Other than that, lengthen it, Cobain_Is_King is right, an stop playing Warcraft lol.
#6
Quote by mamosa
Add "because" to the beginning of the second to last line in the first verse.
Other than that, lengthen it, Cobain_Is_King is right, an stop playing Warcraft lol.


lmao, I stopped a long time ago.