Poll: Which one?
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View poll results: Which one?
Red
7 70%
Blue
3 30%
Voters: 10.
#1
5 days. One vote. One winner. But who? You decide.

A Rightly Timed Pause (When Hearts Attack)

The headlights press as negatives,
Against your curtained eyes.
Though the window shields the worst of it,
You still can smell the light.
You seal your heart in an envelope
As the sun bleeds out the sky;
A letter mailed to a funeral
To be promptly stamped, then die:

Can’t convey the way that dew drops dry.

The AC pushes that thought away,
As choking air meets you full-face.
Get out of the car and lie in the grass,
Police hearts and broken cars pass.
Exhale your thoughts through the stereo,
White noise turned to acrid gold;
And your drowning-grip on the steering wheel,
Betrays the way you feel...


The glass is thick with insects and the lost cause,
Sweating glances and the rightly timed pause.
By a show of hearts and the dripping jaws,
who all is for never looking back?;
to go meet Heaven the hell, the oz,
When hearts attack.



Blast From Forty Feet down the Timeline

girl on the street, not too much meat
so I looked twice - that's once, repeat
eyed her eyes up, kindest I've seen
spoke with a cheek, name's maureen
brunette in colour, highlights in blond
invite was offered - come on, respond
blurted a yes, lest I entered arrest
so back to mine, at nine, she said

I got a space on my arm, my arm, my arm
my arms for her, it was built for hers
I got a space on my arm, my arm, my arm
my arms for her, it was built for hers

over coffee and tea, she learnt about me
same as I learnt about her, you see
none of the silence, instead there was laughter
neither of us hinted what we were after
a wife for the night, one for the morning
"husband'd good, if he gave me warning
I wouldn't turn him down if he asked me flatly
though he'd have to know his way around - exactly"

I got a space on my arm, my arm, my arm
my arms for her, it was built for hers
I got a space on my arm, my arm, my arm
my arms for her, it was built for hers
#2
nice match-up.

red is slightly over-the-top,
blue has a silly, almost juvenile chorus. but the second line hooked me.
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#4
Crap I don't think I put an end date on this.

This ends on the SEVENTH at 2:51pm. I won't be here so if any passing person or mod can just check the score and post it in the thread, or add an end date to thet poll, that would be cool.