#1
I have quite a few haikus I wrote earlier this year so I thought I may as well post them up over a few weeks and see if i can get some crit. Cheers in advance. This is the first. Only short but it's a haiku so...
C4C as usual.


Shadows

Shadows of the past,
Glimpses of the future,
Mean nothing to me now.
#3
I really like it. Im not really into haikus, but I think it descripes a bleak moment / feeling really good. And because it is so short it makes you think more about it.
Looking forward to more of it
#6
We don't see much Haiku poetry here, but for one this is wonderful. What strikes me as great about it that all the questions and sub-meanings and content comes after the last line, when the full meaning hits the reader with its full impact.

Nice work.
This is not a pipe