#1
Missed Page

“I come in at night
And expect to see some transparent slut
At the top of the stairs” waving down at me
With a mint in her mouth

A breeze to her step
I have never slept
With her
With her

Its in the days
Where the chalk is dry like your mouth
I'm in love and I don't know why
Its time for the dreams to end

Inside me its crept
The feeling I have slept
In the wrong kingdom

I don't believe she will be
There for me
Its expecting to rain
In the desert

I've missed the page
And gone back to the way it was before

Just dreams
A real quote
We gloat I slept with her
Its a cushion in the classroom




Any critizism on this odd piece I wrote would be appreciated and responded to.
#2
only one piece per 24 hours,
only 2 pieces per 6 days.

please read the rules in the announcement at the top of this forum.


*reported*


i'm reporting this one even though it came earlier than "Flies Blood" because that one already has some momentum in the replies.
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