#1
I need help on this UG. If someone would help fill in the missing pieces to this it would be greatly appreciated. I think I got most of it down. I just need help filling in the transitions and such. Any takers? I'll help you out however I can.

EDIT: When you open it, the intro needs to be 114. Sorry meant to change that.
Attachments:
krakatowa[final].zip
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
#2
Well actually it all was good until the end. Some of the clean parts were a bit too long i guess cause it started to bore me after a while maybe vocals can help that though. Possibly right after riff 70 get into a more speedy lead guitar part and fill it up with some drums, possibly make it into a quick heavy section so keep the heavier riffs on guitar 2.
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#3
Keep the 5/4 part? Or are you saying totally new riff?

EDIT: Didnt mean to post yet.

I hate to have it that long. But we have an extraordinary vocalist. So i left him a lot of room to work with its true.
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
Last edited by FlyingPooooo at Jun 3, 2008,
#4
I think maybe a whole new riff to be honestly like its cool but it doesn't really fit the part after the clean riffs. But also if u have a good vocalist use him as much as possible vocals defiantly play a big role in today's music so maybe go ahead and keep the long clean sections. =)
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#5
Ok, see if this outro is better. I cant get the tempo change right from the clean to outro though.
Attachments:
krakatowa[final].zip
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
#6
riffs in this one are sweet and sweet and sweet

I like this one alot. everything is clean about it.
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#7
I liked the outro in the first one more. Personally, I didn't care for the percussion, but I'm assuming that it was there just for the sake of supporting the guitars; at that, you should add some bass. A lot of the triplets in the rhythm (early on primarily) didn't feel right with me (almost like they're forced), but overall, it's solid. Good work. 7.8/10.
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#8
On GP5 it does sound forced. But with human intonations it works a lot better. I know what you mean, it makes me cringe too. Thanks though.
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
#9
Personally, I couldn't find any faults with the transitions between the segments in the song. The breakdown was real cool. For pretty much most of the song, ****ing awesome stuff.
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